Textual analysis of A lonely soul

Changes during editing

During the first and second drafts of my short film I noticed some minor problems however they were likely to cost me marks on my final product. These include continuity errors, drastic differences in quality and very crude key-masking. Although the key-frame masking was not implemented into the final product it was a serious problem during editing as it was past my skill level. You can see the shot that I would have been required to mask in the beginning of the third act during draft one where A New Man walks behind Brian to sit at the dinning table. It seems simple but this was a problem I was unable to solve.

A day in the life of a student

Draft 2

Reason for revisions

The reason I have revised my computer edits of my ancillary article is simply because I didn't feel that the product I had designed would have followed the conventions of a professional magazine. This is a rabbit hole a fell down during my AS year and I was determined not to do it again so I went for a more simplistic design trying to reflect magazines such as Empire.

Revised Computer render of ancillary text.

Computer rendered draft of ancillary text